tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post4145944512946293262..comments2023-11-14T02:10:02.743-08:00Comments on A Nudge in the Right Direction: Lovin' the Language Blogfest!Krispyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09492607213249874138noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-35873555416965694382011-06-29T14:57:41.165-07:002011-06-29T14:57:41.165-07:00Lovely, lovely writing. Words are wonderful. Yours...Lovely, lovely writing. Words are wonderful. Yours are especially so. <3Ariana Ferronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14841820059012920347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-55260313520074440462011-06-29T10:01:54.628-07:002011-06-29T10:01:54.628-07:00ANGELINE- Thanks for stopping by! I favor the visu...ANGELINE- Thanks for stopping by! I favor the visual, so loved hearing that you found some other senses in there too. :)<br /><br />JO- Thanks!<br /><br />SUMMER- I worked really hard on #1, so I'm glad you like it!<br /><br />KAYLEIGH- Thanks! Alz has a way with dialogue. Her timing is perfect.<br /><br />TRISHA- Thanks, and yes, rule-breaking is more fun! ;)<br /><br />STEPHANIE- Thank you! :DKrispyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492607213249874138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-4264135440914932602011-06-28T10:45:31.977-07:002011-06-28T10:45:31.977-07:00I love number 1--it sounds like such a beautiful o...I love number 1--it sounds like such a beautiful object. :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-55348084282970323912011-06-28T04:19:11.992-07:002011-06-28T04:19:11.992-07:00Those are wonderful. I especially liked #1 and #2...Those are wonderful. I especially liked #1 and #2. Beautiful language and imagery.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09247707812061900770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-10247077699072951302011-06-27T21:33:19.913-07:002011-06-27T21:33:19.913-07:00Beautifully written. I loved them all!Beautifully written. I loved them all!C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-72591320482231869272011-06-27T19:15:50.155-07:002011-06-27T19:15:50.155-07:00I love your excerpts! This is the first writing I&...I love your excerpts! This is the first writing I've read of yours. And it's FABU!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-10224118523585762992011-06-27T18:04:08.502-07:002011-06-27T18:04:08.502-07:00Nice excerpts!! And yay, I like to see rules broke...Nice excerpts!! And yay, I like to see rules broken. HeheTrishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-6830112845697844832011-06-27T17:48:12.834-07:002011-06-27T17:48:12.834-07:00Whoooo - honey I could FEEL those lines! I'm ...Whoooo - honey I could FEEL those lines! I'm loving your writing!!!!! <br /> I'll write you more in email...Sophia Changhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10946233873722107937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-67311131391365891292011-06-27T16:08:29.086-07:002011-06-27T16:08:29.086-07:00LOVE LOVE LOVE #4LOVE LOVE LOVE #4Vicki Rochohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07381089434014961076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-54356205588700151382011-06-27T15:53:28.012-07:002011-06-27T15:53:28.012-07:00Hi!
I'm here from the Blogfest. So many good ...Hi!<br /><br />I'm here from the Blogfest. So many good writers; so many good words.<br /><br />For me, your second excerpt is my fave, but they are all good.<br /><br />LucyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18276125041686069253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-18659956588672164452011-06-27T15:31:19.846-07:002011-06-27T15:31:19.846-07:00You certainly have a way with words!
They read l...You certainly have a way with words! <br /><br />They read like pure magic.<br /><br /><a href="http://thewritesoil.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Write Soil</a>Dawn M. Hamsherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17782257750640888264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-47918191675250069292011-06-27T15:28:46.641-07:002011-06-27T15:28:46.641-07:00The dialogue is great in number four! Totally awes...The dialogue is great in number four! Totally awesome writing!Kayleigh Herbertsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00957748279083177598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-4271839875682870622011-06-27T13:56:15.110-07:002011-06-27T13:56:15.110-07:00Number one is my favorite- great lines!Number one is my favorite- great lines!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-23970472036751865602011-06-27T13:34:50.038-07:002011-06-27T13:34:50.038-07:00Wow - great lines.Wow - great lines.Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-33101354895770849002011-06-27T13:12:05.916-07:002011-06-27T13:12:05.916-07:00*noms the delicious pretties*
I love finding pros...*noms the delicious pretties*<br /><br />I love finding prose that makes me want to wrap up in it. You two are incredibly talented!Danyelle L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10366276085080565870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-9944971615582108092011-06-27T10:50:43.435-07:002011-06-27T10:50:43.435-07:00Elderberry, huh? Good for you. Loved it! Was my fa...Elderberry, huh? Good for you. Loved it! Was my favorite.shellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09596621767297173021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-50297768453815655302011-06-27T09:33:37.364-07:002011-06-27T09:33:37.364-07:00#1 and #5 are my favorites. I really want to read ...#1 and #5 are my favorites. I really want to read the rest of the first story now! ;)Tere Kirklandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13562750950130316280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-39157969600158707252011-06-27T09:12:47.340-07:002011-06-27T09:12:47.340-07:00How fun! Love these.How fun! Love these.Kayeleen Hamblinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07652280450104899423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-26251650192959841262011-06-27T09:09:39.357-07:002011-06-27T09:09:39.357-07:00WOOT for rule breaking!!
NICE selections!WOOT for rule breaking!!<br /><br />NICE selections!Jolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-73787329283115898562011-06-27T08:31:10.373-07:002011-06-27T08:31:10.373-07:00I really like number four! Thanks for sharing.I really like number four! Thanks for sharing.Shalleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907680428735740943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-7711840102220329632011-06-27T08:15:27.937-07:002011-06-27T08:15:27.937-07:00Fantastic! Love the use of all the senses, really ...Fantastic! Love the use of all the senses, really brings everything to life. Pop over to my blog to read my entry.Spanjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13893837904669368614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-73995121453559655412011-06-27T07:38:56.718-07:002011-06-27T07:38:56.718-07:00Ah!! I *love* these! You are (both) tremendous ~ w...Ah!! I *love* these! You are (both) tremendous ~ what beautiful examples!<br /><br />And I'm wishing I'd broken the rules like you did. :( I was a total follower.ali crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023009704454279645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-22810426489384845942011-06-27T07:38:21.593-07:002011-06-27T07:38:21.593-07:00Oooh! Lovin' the language on all 5, but #3 esp...Oooh! Lovin' the language on all 5, but #3 especially. Beautiful writing.Briannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581532070734685757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3119162506009432262.post-33583837324616728682011-06-27T06:27:09.175-07:002011-06-27T06:27:09.175-07:00I love #4!!I love #4!!M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.com